This post demonstrates a basic understanding of your chosen music genre. This is because you have only included an overview of your two chosen videos and have not provided a detailed analysis. The points that you have included are too vague and does not relate to any detailed examples from your videos, which makes your analysis difficult to understand.
Therefore, you need to read over your points again and ensure that you have included detailed examples, to support all the points that you have made.
Finally, you need to include a summary, to explain how your research will assist you with planning and creating your music video.
This post demonstrates a basic understanding of your chosen music genre. This is because you have only included an overview of your two chosen videos and have not provided a detailed analysis. The points that you have included are too vague and does not relate to any detailed examples from your videos, which makes your analysis difficult to understand.
ReplyDeleteTherefore, you need to read over your points again and ensure that you have included detailed examples, to support all the points that you have made.
Finally, you need to include a summary, to explain how your research will assist you with planning and creating your music video.